
Finish the story begins with: “The only residents remaining in the small town of Miners Hill are spirits.”
On this cold, grey day, I stood on top of the hill as the rain started to pour. Thunder rumbled, accompanied by a slash of lightning which sparked the sky for an instant.
I felt totally jaded as I made my way up there. This used to be our playground. We all ran up and down until we were tired but satisfied. Ah, the joy of childhood memories.
Now, Miners Hill is like a ghost town, only spirits live here after a big fire burned most of our houses. (89 words)

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Eep, that’s morbid! But I like the story so far. ✪
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thanks, Angie 🙂 glad you like it!
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Nicely done.
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cheers and have a great day! 🙂
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Gosh, I remember those days of childhood and playing outside until we were all tuckered out! Nicely done! Thank you LadyLee for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge! Be well… ^..^
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thanks 🙂 I love your challenges 🙂 be well, too x
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That really puts a smile on my face Lady Lee! See you next week! ^..^
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A ghost among all the ghosts! Very good!
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thanks, PJ 🙂
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Lovely ladylee well done.
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cheers, Michael 🙂
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A ghost town full of memories, nicely done.
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cheers, Sally 🙂
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Memories of happier, more carefree days. It must be strange to go back to a place which has changed so much – this place more than most.
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it must be hard, thanks Draliman 🙂
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Memories are not always pleasant, but we need those as well. I love how you mesh the two challenges together.
Well done…
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thanks and enjoy your week 🙂
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It’s always bittersweet to return to a place of childhood memories – to find it so changed must me very painful. Well done. 🙂
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thanks 🙂 It must be very painful…
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Brilliant background to a wonderful trip down memory lane ~Well written ladylee 🙂
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thanks, John 🙂
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