All he could do now is hope that someone out there, some crew member of a ship or a plane, would see the fire or the message they left in the sand. He looked at the fire and then overlooked the island. From where he stood he could see the entire island. The luscious bush and the beach, where they found themselves stranded. He was wondering if she knew. She probably did by now. He so wanted to let her know that he was okay. That the horse was fine too. He had to go back. The others were trying to build a shelter for the night. One of them was injured. Hopefully someone would be here to rescue them soon.
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Every time he thought about her, about them, about their coming wedding, the plans, her white dress, his tuxedo, the cake and all the shivaree – he couldn’t help himself but get emotional. If there was some way to send her his message – some sort of telesthesia – that he was fine, that the horse, gentle and docile, was fine too. He was just supposed to bring the horse to her as a wedding present. But that prodigious waves and storm made the ship capsize. He and the horse ended up being stranded in this island, along with some other survivors.
The entire island wasn’t bad at all, with the luscious bush and the beach, the grass still wet with dew – it was like a paradise. Oh how he wished she was here, too. He helped the others build some shelter for the night. He also looked after the one who was injured. He put some bandage around the person’s injured elbow and gave him a drink from a coconut, if only they have a glass, but drinking it from the coconut husk was also adequate. He told the injured to rest. They just have to hope and wait.
For: Finish It! #39 and Wordle #87
Great story and use of the words. Sad that he is disappointed and stranded and I imagine she is disappointed and anxious to find out what happened to him. It makes for a sad wedding for her, but perhaps there will be happier times once he is rescued.
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I hope it ends well, thanks 🙂
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He remains hopeful during incredible challenges. I believe he will make it back!
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I believe so, too 🙂
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Your writing is so beautiful! Thanks for participating again 🙂 Please come back.
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my pleasure 🙂 and I’ll try to come back, your prompts are wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Author S B Mazing and commented:
With the right person there a deserted island would be fantastic. But if that person is not with you… it might be hard. Loved this story. Fantastic what you all come up with. Please keep it up…
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cheers and have a lovely weekend 🙂
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