A Lune is a sort of English-language haiku. While the haiku is a three-line poem with a 5-7-5 syllable count, the lune is a three-line poem with a 5-3-5 syllable count. Thereโs also a variant based on word-count, instead of syllable count, where the poem still has three lines, but the first line has five words, the second line has three words, and the third line has five words again. Either kind will do, and you can write a one-lune poem, or write a poem consisting of multiple stanzas of lunes. Happy writing!
LOVE
how do I love you?
in many ways
I dreamed what you dreamed
love is powerful and intense
beautiful and messy
it turns me inside out
when we breathe same air
when it’s magical
two hearts become one soul
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
For: two weeks into NaPoWriMo and Labour of Love
Super Lune! Enjoyed this…..Hugs!
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thanks, Bushka ๐
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lovely ๐
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cheers, Sonya ๐
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yay… this makes my heart skip a beat. especially the last stanza. ๐ โค
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awww, cheers, Rosema ๐
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*kilig* ๐
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Lovely Lune… ! ๐
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thanks, Gradmama ๐
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interesting to find out new things about poetry writing.
Someone comes to my creative writing group- he writes poetry, and wants to improve- I have no idea how to help him as the rest of us are writers of stories- maybe I could introduce him to this
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thanks, ZR ๐ I use this site: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/index.html
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I didn’t know what a lune was but it is a lovely form. Thanks for sharing this.
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my pleasure, Susan ๐
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