destination, nearer, thorny, disappear, words, describe
on a good day
birds singing
forsythia blooming
kisses from Him Indoors
tortoises in the garden
eating dandelions
sweet words describing the day
destination is nearer
anxiety disappears
thorny tiff forgotten
ready to greet day
with all the cheers
peace at last!
on a bad day
wolves howling
flowers dying
Him Indoors left
spiders and snakes
giving me fright
thorny roses
canโt reach destination
no words can alter fate
hope disappears
nearer disaster
can’t describe
help!
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
For: NaPoWriMo: Day 16 by Elizabeth and Day Seventeen
You really dug into this suggestion. Love all the clear details that define those sometimes hard feelings. It seems to just slip-slide down the page, but with a definite destination.
Elizabeth
https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/04/16/slip-sliding-away/
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thanks, Elizabeth ๐ your prompts are just super!
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Great poem Lady Lee. Very neat how nature reflects your mood on a good day or bad day. Like the music video as well ๐
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thanks, Mandi ๐ enjoy your weekend!
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You too Lady Lee.
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I love the juxtaposition of dandelions and roses here.
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cheers, whimsygizmo ๐
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