THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “The Poet As Hero” by Siegfried Sassoon: scornful, harsh, old, silly, cry, serene, infant, dreams, senseless, smite, absolution, songs
A harsh reality dwells in this well
And with his sword he smites the water
Such senseless act, perhaps silly, one can tell
An absolution he requires for his errs
An old song, a serene cry for what befell
And with a scornful fleeting look, he stirs
What happens to this man and his reflection?
An ashen figure for what he has done*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
*A Ottava Rima is a poem written in 8-line octives. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme: one octive poem. abababcc
For: Thursday Photo Prompt – reflection #writephoto Posted on September 1, 2016 by Sue Vincent and Whirligig 74 by Magical Mystical Teacher
Beautiful! Thank you.
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you’re very welcome, Sue 🙂
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Very nice. I love when people write real poetry like this, like where they keep it to a certain form. I’m not too good at that cuz I don’t know much about poetry lol
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thanks, Shane 🙂 have a great day!
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Loved this 🙂
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glad you loved this, Morgan 🙂
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amazing!
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thanks, Sharmishtha 🙂
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