The Terzanelle is a poetry type which is a combination of the villanelle and the terza rima forms. It is a 19-line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets/tercets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the first triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is repeated, reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the center line of the next-to-the-last stanza which appears in the quatrain. The rhyme and refrain scheme for the triplets is as follows:
1. A
2. B
3. A
4. b
5. C
6. B
7. c
8. D
9. C
10. d
11. E
12. D
13. e
14. F
15. E
Ending Type 1:
16. f
17. A
18. F
19. A
Persistent rain on a grey day
To an abandoned mill she walked
Persistent rain on a grey day
Perhaps she was openly mocked
Her past was the past no one knew
To an abandoned mill she walked
He whispered a subdued adieu
Then he packed his bags and left her
Her past was the past no one knew
She cried and everything seemed blur
Knew there was nothing she could do
Then he packed his bags and left her
Helpless with things she has been through
The world seemed to be against her
Knew there was nothing she could do
She wished she could have the answer
Persistent rain on a grey day
The world seemed to be against her
Persistent rain on a grey day
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
I am so impressed with this… I do enjoy these kind of poetry ‘challenges’, but need to be in the right ‘zone’ for them!
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thanks, Freya š glad you enjoy this!
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The rules alone of that one make my eyes glaze over. A big round of applause for even attempting it, and more applause for making a n impressive poem š
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cheers, Jane š I just have to try, took me a long time but I think it’s worth it ā¤
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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thanks for the reblog š appreciated!
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Those repeated lines work so well with this picture, somehow. They feel like the incessant rain. It’s so hard to do these forms and make them flow as well as you have. Very impressive!
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thanks, Sarah š you made me smile ā¤
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Enjoyed that immensely, liked the rhythm. (still trying to figure out that ‘Terzanelle’) š
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thanks, Yudith š glad you enjoyed it!
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Well done! š
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thanks, Merrild š
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