THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from puzzle books, of which Jae Rose is fond: shape, milk, feet, play, bird, car, dirt, love, brick, theme, diary, pumpkin
My feet brought me to this dirt
Don’t know why it gives me comfort
A creek where no one swims
Is this society’s urban paradigm?
No children playing
Nor dogs barking
Even birds have departed
All we see is flood and mud
People left their rubbish
After eating chips with fish
Milk cartons and bricks
Just to get their kicks
Sometimes even shopping carts
Development thwarted
Left my car, diary not so full
When my mind so roomful
Time to think, to reflect
Perhaps there’s a new prospect
On love, work and other themes
While I’m walking by the stream
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
For: Sunday Photo Fiction – September 4th 2016 and Whirligig 75 by Magical Mystical Teacher
What a wonderful stream of thought and words (and thank you..yes fond of puzzles 😉
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thanks, Jae 🙂 glad you like it!
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Great poem. It’s a shame people decide that it is more fun to dump their trash in the rivers. When the area was flooded, part of it was dammed due to all the bags, balls and other rubbish that was in there.
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such a shame to be dumping waste in rivers…thanks and have a great week! 🙂
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You too 🙂
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Good work combining photo prompt and words, lovely poem.
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thanks, Iain 🙂
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Great job on this Lady Lee. Insightful and vivid descriptions.
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cheers, Mandi 🙂
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