He really stepped in it this time. He has to remain in focus, despite the pain in his chest. After the three men left him in this awful state, he has to think fast. He tried to free himself, wanted to scream but couldn’t. He suffered in silence. What a mess he got himself in. This time, the love of his life is also in trouble, if he cannot give them what they wanted.
When he woke up, the pain was gone and he could stand up. He went home, rinsed himself and made himself a pot of tea. They gave him the date when he has to submit what they needed. He has to steer hard right rudder to get out of this trouble. The will to survive this is stronger, especially if it also involved the safety of his lady love. One more chance to live or die.
For: Writing Prompt #179 “Collage 30”, TBP’s On-line Writer’s Guild #32, Wordle 267 Sep 25 by Brenda Warren
ladyleemanila 
Sometimes love can push us to achieve some extraordinary things – a great, suspenseful write
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thanks, Jae 🙂 Happy Sunday!
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Engaging response LL, I hope he achieves what he needs to…
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I hope so, too Michael 🙂 Happy Sunday!
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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cheers for the reblog 🙂
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Lets hope she is worth it but it sounds as though itis not over yet…she must be good!
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yes, let’s hope she’s worth it! thanks, Old Egg 🙂
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Thank you so much for the quick and engaging response. Loved it.
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cheers, tnkerr 🙂
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I would have needed something stronger than a pot of tea! Great little tale..
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me, too! thanks, Keith 🙂
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A real cliffhanger!
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cheers 🙂
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