The noise was Pauline opening the door, blue dawn light outlining the frayed edges of her hair. She picked some flowers in the garden. Lilies, daffodils, roses and dahlias. The scents made her happy. Alec is still asleep on the bed, breathing softly. Last night’s bickering was still on her mind. She shouldn’t have said those words. It was a signal that they should try hard not to be separated. That they should hear and understand what the other was saying. She came in and took her shoes off. She put the flowers in a vase and placed them on the tray. Then she started brewing some coffee and making some breakfast. A nice breakfast in bed for Alec to say sorry. She couldn’t wait for him to wake up.
For: Sunday Photo Fiction – September 25th – October 2nd 2016
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appreciate the reblog 🙂
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It’s always good to try and work things out. After all, they got together for a reason.
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that’s true 🙂 Happy Sunday!
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I get the feeling that he isn’t going to wake up. But that’s my creepy story guy take on it 😉
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cool take! Happy Sunday 🙂
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I was totally going there too, but it’s because I read too many stories on J Hardy Carroll’s blog. 😉
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I do like an open ended story, and this is just perfect!
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cheers, Keith 🙂
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A fresh start for them, I could feel Spring in the air. Nice, simple tale of everyday life. Good work.
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thanks, Iain 🙂
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Very thoughtful! Nice job. 🙂
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thanks, Sascha 🙂
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Nice story — it’s nice to be reminded that people can say they’re sorry and try to make things better, instead of so many stories where they just give up and leave. Three cheers for working on love!
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three cheers on love! thanks, Joy 🙂
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A very sweet story 🙂
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thanks, Jade 🙂
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