autumn cry
dark clouds on the sky
blood and tears
of sorrow
men fighting for our freedom
remembering them
falling rain
echoes of autumn
fields of men
sheaves of pain
in their bravery and nerve
falling one by one
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
For: B&P’s Shadorma & Beyond – Autumn Rain by DH Lawrence – October 1, 2016
you’ve captured the sadness – well done
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thanks, Candy 🙂
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You caught and interpreted very nicely the feel of that utter sadness spawned by war – nicely done LadyLee. Bastet
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thanks, Bastet 🙂 have a lovely week!
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You too.
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