a girl in fringe, pretty in red
Love is being on cloud nine
Butterflies and bees in sunshine
You were gone and my world fell apart
My heart was shattered on your depart
From cotton clouds, days are cloudy
From waiting, I become angry
I deserve better
You’re not worth it
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Oh, Lady Lee, what happened? You started off on cloud nine – you definitely deserve better! We need you back up in the clouds.
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hehehe the power of imagination! thanks, Kim 🙂
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🙂
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I like the rhyming pattern in this piece. Love is like being on cloud 9 – until you tumble back to earth. I think we all would like to be on those clouds forever.
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I’m sure we’ll go back there! thanks, Arcadia 🙂
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So sad to read that you crashed from cloud 9 to cloudy days ~ Certainly you deserve better ~
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I deserve better indeed! thanks, Grace 🙂
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Sad theme but well written.
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cheers, Paul 🙂
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Love is as varied as the banks of clouds we see. I hope you have let time sweep away the storm.
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time is a great help! thanks, Brian 🙂
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I like the image of being on cloud nine ❤️ but oh would not want your heart shattered.. Hugs ❤️
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promise, I’m fine! thanks, Sanaa ❤
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Nice change from the metrical portion to the last two lines emphasizing the change in perspective.
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thanks, Frank 🙂
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Ouch, that hard, hard lesson it seems almost all of us have to learn.
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makes us stronger! thanks, Victoria 🙂
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And wiser!
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A powerful Quadrille; my favorite line is this one: ” From cotton clouds, days are cloudy”. Well done.
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cheers, Dr. Crystal 🙂
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My favorite line of this poem is: “Butterflies and bees in sunshine”….both beautiful, in this case. Both work to make things grow (by being pollinators) but also opposites. A butterfly doesn’t cause pain. A bee stings, just like a good love gone bad. You did a fine job with this, Lady. Have a blessed week!
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thanks for the analysis, Suzanne 🙂 have a blessed week, too!
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You’re welcome, Lady. Thank you! 🙂
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Oh to fall beneath those clouds.. I so hope you managed to climb back.
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back in no time, I hope 🙂 thanks, Björn 🙂
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Aww… 😦 This feels so sad but I hope she finds the one who’ll take her back to the clouds.
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yes! have a great week, Maria 🙂
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You too, Ladylee!
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oh the twist!! GREAT job! ❤
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cheers, Rosema ❤
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cheers!
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Well written and you will find the sunny cloud again :o)
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thanks and have a lovely day! 🙂
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Thank you :o)
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I forgot about cloud nine… glad this was just an imaginative piece. But good message here – she does deserve better!
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thanks, Debi 🙂 have a lovely day!
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Quite the turn of events in only 44 words! Well done.
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thanks, Linda 🙂
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Those clouds are shifty, aren’t they? I like this.
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yes, they are! thanks 🙂
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Who hasn’t been knocked off Cloud 9 down to cloudy days…we all can relate I think! Well said, Lady Lee. 🙂
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cheers, Bodhirose 🙂
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Reblogged this on ladyleemanila and commented:
on cloud nine…
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