Five Words: [ GONE – SENSE – TRACE – VOICE – PATH ]
for what sense it is when he’s gone
not even a trace seen from path
I keep hearing his voice at dawn
for what sense it is when he’s gone
aloud in a whisper – begone!
and I used to have what he hath
for what sense it is when he’s gone
not even a trace seen from path*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
* A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.
For: Weekly Writing Challenge #59 by the secret keeper
Very good. Just loved it. Looking forward to reading more such exciting stuff.
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thanks 🙂 your words are music to my ears!
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Hi, though i should also contribute my share. Do let me know your reactions. Thanks, have a nice day, Neel
https://neelwritesblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/25/neeelwritesbloghes-gone-weekly-writing-challenge-5925102016/
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I love your poem, Neel 🙂
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Thanks. Just wanted to know if there is a place to post this challenge so that i can see thye responses of other contestants as well.
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hi Neel, follow the link by the secret keeper (in my post) https://secretkeeper.net/2016/10/17/weekly-writing-challenge-59/ 🙂
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