my yang to my yin
we are for the win
you and me against the world
challenges we take
whatever the stake
we’re living in our dream-world
we say we will try
limit is the sky
we know it’s not that easy
other factors play
and our world seems grey
honour and trust is the key
you came to my life
we seem to strife
we hurt the one we love most
we keep asking why
until we say goodbye
we thought we’ve made it, almost*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
* The Alouette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules:
Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7
Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b
For: Music Prompt 67 # Backstreet Boys – “Quit playing games with my Heart”, Tale Weaver #92: free form free flow (Nov. 3, 2016), NaNoPoblano Day 4
Whistles!!❤️❤️This is absolutely incredible writing, Ladylee 😀 such emotion and depth in your lines sigh.. love the brilliance with which you have executed the form. Beautifully done. Thank you so much for participating at Music Prompt at MLMM ❤️❤️
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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awww, cheers, Sanaa ❤ glad you like it 🙂
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Ohh that is stunning! Love your poem.
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cheers, Jade 🙂
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Lovely contribution! Thanks so much!
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pleasure’s all mine 🙂
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