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I am off to see the sunrise
To be with you, my beloved
I know you I have always loved
My fish and the foggy skies
Riding with me to go with you
To the sunrise and the great view
I hope you will like my surprise
You always ask if I will come
I thought about it, it’s awesome
Last look at my place, dry my eyes
New adventures, new challenges
Thinking about this for ages
Don’t worry, we will improvise
Together we will have some fun
And it will always rise, the sun*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
* The Constanza, created by Connie Marcum Wong, consists of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line has a set meter of eight syllables. The first lines of all the stanzas can be read successively as an independent poem, with the rest of the poem weaved in to express a deeper meaning. The first lines convey a theme written in monorhyme, while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together.
Rhyme scheme: a/b/b, a/c/c, a/d/d, a/e/e, a/f/f………etc.
This week’s photo prompt is provided by Footy and Foodie. Thank you Footy and Foodie!
really beautiful Lady lee
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thanks, Prior 🙂
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the art and the words – such a freedom feel
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cheers, Prior 🙂 have a great day ❤
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🙂
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I love this one, it is really beautifully written 🙂
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thanks, Angie 🙂
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Don’t worry, we will improvise
Together we will have some fun
Good idea to have some targeted things to do. Wonderful new form to explore further!
Hank
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glad you like it, Hank 🙂
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Wonderful poem, Lady Lee! Very creative response to the prompt.
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thanks, Priceless Joy 🙂
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Lovely response Lady Lee, you created some delightful images..
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thanks, Michael 🙂
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Love this whimsical and delightful take on the prompt! Thank you for sharing.
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you’re welcome, Sailaja 🙂
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Intricate and delicately interwoven challenges. Beautiful imagery.
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thanks, Lorraine 🙂
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Exquisite!
Ellespeth
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cheers, Ellespeth 🙂
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