When we’ll go up in flames
Flicker in the moonlight
Staying on the outside
City burning in fires
We watched it burned and sighed
When we’ll go up in flames
We’re hunting silhouettes
Always feeling the warm
In the dark corners, too
Will there be some storm?
When we’ll go up in flames
We’ll stay where we are safe
Try to keep ourselves cool
Keep ourselves together
Try not to be such fool
When we’ll go up in flames
Sneak on the edge of dark
Smoking in total black
City in full chaos
Won’t be turning aback*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
* The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line within the stazas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.
The Monchielle form was created by Jim T. Henriksen.
Written for November Notes hosted by two lovely and awesome writers, Rosema of A Reading Writer and Sarah of Heartstring Eulogies. Come, join the musical fun!
Also for: NaNoPoblano Day 25
We’ll stay where we are safe
Try to keep ourselves cool
Keep ourselves together
Try not to be such fool
When helping out in a calamity is beyond us then the next best thing to do is self-preservation. That is true ladylee!
Hank
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cheers, Hank 🙂
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We’ll stay where we are safe
Try to keep ourselves cool
Keep ourselves together
Try not to be such fool
When helping out in a calamity is beyond us then the next best thing to do is self-preservation. That is true ladylee!
Hank
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so very true, thanks, Hank 🙂
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ooooh. such a fiery and honest take on the song, Lady!
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yes, fiery one! thanks, Rosema ❤
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😀 you’re welcome!
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