THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “Autumn Song” by Daniel Mark Epstein: flower, danger, torn, gobbled, regrets, brindled, fleeting, cargo, leaving, tongues, hearts, everyone
If I were to write a novel
All the intrigues but then blissful
Some with regrets and with torn hearts
Brindled and fleeting on some parts
With flowers and dangers for some
Nothing left unturned, not a crumb
Gobbled up by conflict, top of the chart
Bridled and fleeting on some parts
A cargo full of eclectic and exciting bits
Can’t wait to publish, hope it’s such a hit
I hope it’s got some lessons to impart
Bridled and fleeting on some parts
If I were to write a novel
Bridled and fleeting on some parts*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
* A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be:
AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
For: Sunday Photo Fiction – October 9th 2016, Whirligig 80 by Magical Mystical Teacher
We look forward to reading it – both bridled and fleeting
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thanks, Jae 🙂
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Wow, I’m always very jealous of people who can write good poetry in a response to challenges like this.
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thank you 🙂
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Writing both bridled and fleeting does capture the readers attention taking them on a trip they had not imagined themselves. The suprise element is so important isn’t it?
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right, oldegg, the surprise element is important 🙂 cheers!
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Great poem. Excellent way to use all the prompts. Awesome.
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thanks and have a great week! 🙂
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You too 🙂
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Great poem lady Lee. I enjoy the line about not leaving a “crumb” unturned.
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cheers and a great week to you, Mandi 🙂
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You as well 🙂
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