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billow of steam coming from her hair
wisps of smoke rose into the air
reflecting the water as she spins
barging her way through as she grins
like finning along the sandy bottom
this time by the river lock she comes
as she pass by the bridge, one wonders
a grain of truth, is that what she’s after?
shadow of shoulder filtering her green dress
bless her, she’s running like a train express
perhaps she’s got something to solve
her brain’s trying not to dissolve
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
For: Photo Challenge #133, Wordle 268 Oct 2 by Brenda Warren , Sandbox Writing Challenge #58 — It’s all in your head!
Hm… Interesting…
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cheers 🙂
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I can feel the chaos of her mind when that answer doesn’t come easily. Some lovely imagery: ‘finning along the sandy bottom’.
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thanks, Safar 🙂
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I love the rhymes, and the candid approach to crafting a tale. I loved this part:”bless her, she’s running like a train express
perhaps she’s got something to solve”, and the whole thing just makes me think of a very awesome blues song.
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cheers, Oloriel 🙂
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