What is a troiku … it’s an invented haiku variation created by Kristjaan Panneman, better known to you as Chèvrefeuille of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai and our author for Heeding Haiku with Ha! He invented the troiku back in November of 2012 (click the link troiku above for his introduction).
Here’s how it works …
you write a haiku … for example:
the persimmons fall
even the last fruit is ripe
now the snow may fall
© G.s.k. ‘15
now I break it up into its parts … and write a haiku from each line:
the persimmons fall
for the pleasure of the ants
in October
even the last fruit is ripe
pull out the winter duvet
rake up the leaves
now the snow may fall
all the fruits now harvested
the swallows long gone
© G.s.k. ‘15
white water curtain
the sound of a waterfall
pouring onto me
white water curtain
sparkling like diamonds
breezy paradise
the sound of a waterfall
stridently trickling down
refreshingly good
pouring onto me
the sound of the autumn leaves
as the wind whispers
(c) ladyleemanila 2015
Beautiful!
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cheers, humbird 🙂
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You did a wonderful job – really capturing the essence and feeling – all within the form 😀
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thanks, jabberjeans 🙂
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Lovely BUT I don`t want to think of the snow yet…did you know that is actually a four letter word?!! 😉
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yes, it’s too soon for snow! thanks, Oliana 🙂
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Some say we are into a heatwave until November…that is a bit worrisome for the island of Montreal…what is happening with all of this global warming?!!
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Bravo … you wrote a great troiku LadyLee and I love how you worked the autumn leaves into your ending! 🙂
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thanks, Bastet 🙂 pure luck, I guess! cheers again ❤
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Ach .. I’ve seen you write haiku, so I don’t think it’s pure luck! ❤
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